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5 Years Time

I'd known Tommy since he was a boy

Played my affections like they were one of his toys

We grew up together

We went out together

I'd call him my first real love.

But I never stopped to think what he'd be like in 5 years time

Never stopped to wonder if he had dreams like mine

A boy on the wrong side may be all very well

For a girl on the right side escaping from hell

But he's a limited boy

Of limited means

There's gotta come a time

When you listen to your best friend's screams!

A couple of points about this.  The first is that line 6 used to read 'look like in 5 years time' but I decided looks were a bit superficial.  The second thing is those last 2 lines.  There was a lot of  to-ing and fro-ing I seem to remember, and alternatives included 'Inside your head all you hear is your parents screams.'  I figured nobody wanted the word 'parent' in a song.

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