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Strange Greetings.

I wish it was you, and not me

Even though you'd feel the way I feel now

You'd be alive

You'd be free

You could get o-ver me.

I wish it was me, and not you

Listening to our favourite song, and see-ing

Something we used to know

Something that had to go.

When we were together

We said it was forever

Now I'm here without you

Gonna see you later.

I wish I knew, what you'd say

If you saw me acting the way I am now

I think I know

But so what

You aint around to listen to what

I've got to say

You were the one, not me

That went away

On that day...

Strange greetings indeed huh? Especially when you consider I actually started this as a verse for a greetings card (I'd read somewhere they got good money) It gradually evolved into something else, though I'm still not sure what...

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